Comments on: What is an ‘All-Star’? https://puckbuddys.com/2016/01/26/what-is-an-all-star/ Boys Who Like Boys Who Like Hockey Sat, 30 Apr 2016 22:24:05 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ By: Doug https://puckbuddys.com/2016/01/26/what-is-an-all-star/#comment-27775 Sat, 30 Apr 2016 22:24:05 +0000 http://puckbuddys.com/?p=13448#comment-27775 Zvi – we encourage young writers as much as we can, helping them refine their chops but also find their voice. If some of the posts are a bit ragged, we’re OK with that as long as everyone is learning and growing.

]]> By: zvi LikesTV (@zviltv) https://puckbuddys.com/2016/01/26/what-is-an-all-star/#comment-27312 Fri, 29 Jan 2016 15:20:36 +0000 http://puckbuddys.com/?p=13448#comment-27312 Is this the edited version of the piece? The language is confusingly baroque and also has a stylistic affectation (& for and) which make me think this was a draft, not the final version.

The first paragraph was so poorly written I almost bailed after the first two sentences, came back to try to figure out if it was some sort of joke, and then permanently stopped after paragraph three because it’s terrible.

This seems out of character for Puck Buddys. It’s disappointing to me, because I would have liked to read a discussion about what is an all-star, but the writing was bad enough to chill my interest in the topic.

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